Thursday, 1 December 2011

SCRIPT

1 INT (UK BIRMINGHAM PRISON) 1200 HOURS PM

(A PRISON GUARD WEARING BLUE TROUSERS AND BLUE SHIRT HOLDING A SET OF KEYS WALKING DOWN THE CORRIDOR LOOKING FOR A CERTAIN CELL AND STOPS AT ONE)

PRISON GUARD 1:
ALRIGHT CHAP, GET OUT

(OPENS CELL DOOR AND WALKS PRISONER EARLY 20S WEARING ORANGE JUMP SUIT DOWN THE CORRIDOR)

2 INT (UK ESSEX PRISON) 1215 HOURS PM 

(PRISON GUARD GREEN TROUSERS AND BROWN JACKET WITH ONE KEY WALKING DOWN THE CORRIDOR LOOKING FOR CELL 25 AND STOPS AT ONE)

PRISON GUARD 2:
YOUR FREE TO GO

(OPENS CELL DOOR AND WALKS PRISONER LATE 20S WEARING RAGGEDY BLUE TROUSERS AND GREY TOP DOWN THE CORRIDOR)

3 INT (UK EAST LONDON PRISON) 1230 HOURS PM

(PRISON GUARD BLUE JEANS AND BLACK T-SHIRT WITH A SET OF KEYS WALKING DOWN THE CORRIDOR LOOKING FOR A CERTAIN CELL AND STOPS AT ONE)

PRISON GUARD 3:
YOUR GOING HOME

(OPENS CELL DOOR AND WALKS PRISONER WEARS DARK BLUE DIRTY JUMP SUIT AND MID 20S DOWN THE CORRIDOR)
4 INT (UK MANCHESTER PRISON) 1245 HOURS PM

(PRISON GUARD BLUE TROUSERS AND BLUE SHIRT WITH A SET OF KEYS WALKING DOWN THE CORRIDOR AND STOPS AT CELL NUMBER 12)

PRISON GUARD 4: ITS YOU LUCKY DAY MATE, LET'S GO

(OPENS CELL DOOR AND WALKS PRISONER EARLY 30S AND WEARING BLACK TROUSERS AND BLUE T-SHIRT DOWN THE CORRIDOR)


5 EXT (OUTSIDE COVENTRY UNIVERSITY) 1400 HOURS PM

(KAM WEARING JEANS AND AN ADIDAS JACKET, JACK IS STANDING WITH A PHONE WITH BLACK TROUSERS AND A WHITE POLO SHIRT AND SAM IS WEARING BLACK TRACKSUIT BOTTOMS AND 
NIKE T-SHIRT. ALL OF THEM ARE OUTSIDE COVENTRY CITY COLLEGE WAITING FOR CHUN)


JACK:
ALRIGHT

KAM:
WHERES CHUN

SAM:
I JUST PHONED HIM, HE SAID HE COMING. HE SAID THERE'S ONE MORE THING TO DO

KAM:
ALRIGHT THEN, LETS WAIT FOR HIM TO COME AND WE'LL FIND OUT WHAT IT IS

JACK:
CANT WAIT

(CHUN ARRIVES WEARING A BLACK JACKET AND BLACK JEANS) 

CHUN:
COME ON THEN LETS GET PREPARED,

JACK:
FOR WHAT

CHUN:
WERE GOING TO ROB A SCHOOL

ALL:
WHAT!!!

CHUN:
WE ALL ARE GOING TO ROB A SCHOOL

SAM:
I'M NOT ROBBING ANYTHING, REMEMBER LAST TIME WHAT HAPPENED, THAT'S THE REASON WE WENT TO PRISON

JACK:
HE'S RIGHT

KAM:
IM ACTUALLY UP FOR IT

CHUN:
COME ON MAN, JUST THIS ONCE

JACK:
 ALRIGHT JUST THIS ONCE I'L COME

SAM:
WHAT HAPPENS IF WE GET CAUGHT

KAM:
SO YOU ARE COMING

SAM:
ONLY IF ONE OF YOU KNOWS WHERE AND WHAT TO DO

CHUN:
YEAH OF COURSE, I KNOW EXACTLY WHERE TO GO, WHEN TO GO, WHAT TO TAKE, AND MOST IMPORTANT OF ALL THE ESCAPE PLAN, JUST MEET ME AT PRIMROSE HILL STREET OUTSIDE WORLD KEBAB AT 4 O CLOCK



6 EXT (2 PRIMROSE HILL STREET) 1600 HOURS PM

(CHUN ARRIVES AND MEETS THE BOYS NEXT TO THE ZEBRA CROSSINGS OPPOSITE THE SCHOOL)

CHUN:
 WELL LADS, THIS IS IT

SAM:
ARE YOU MAD, THIS IS SIDNEY STRINGER, THERES CCTV EVERYWHERE

KAM:
DONT WORRY I'LL DEAL WITH THOSE

JACK:
I HAVE GOT A MAP OF THE SCHOOL, MY NEPHEW HAD ONE UNTIL I SNUCK IT INTO MY POCKET

SAM:
ALRIGHT THEN, IF WE GET COPPED THEN YOU CAN TELL THEM THAT YOU HAVE BEEN LITTLE NAGHTY BOYS AND STOLE FROM THE SCHOOL OK !!!

JACK:
ALRIGHT CALM DOWN

CHUN:
NO NEED TO THROW A FIT

KAM:
YEAH BUT YOU CAN TELL HE IS STREESED

SAM:
LETS JUST GO


 7 INT (INSIDE SIDNEY STRINGER ACADEMY) 1610 HOURS

(BY THE RECEPTION THE BOYS TRY TO FIND A 
WAY INSIDE THE SCHOOL TO FIND SOMEWHERE TO ROB)

CHUN:
COME ON JACK TAKE OUT THE RECEPTIONISTS WITH THE UV CAMERA FLASH THEN SHOVE THEM IN THE TANK ROOM

(JACK FLASHES THE RECEPTIONISTS THEN HITS THEM OVER THE HEAD ONCONSIOUS WITH A METAL BLOCK)

JACK:
MY PLEASURE

 (JACK FLASHES THE RECEPTIONISTS THEN HITS THEM OVER THE HEAD WITH A METAL BLOCK) 

KAM:
WAIT, JACK GIVE ME THE MAP

(GIVES HIM THE MAP)

KAM:
ON HERE IT SAYS THERE IS A MEDIA AND MUSIC DEPARTMENT ON THE RIGHT SIDE GROUND FLOOR THATS INTERESTING

SAM:
LETS GO FOR IT

CHUN:
WHAT I THOUGHT YOU WERENT UP FOR THIS

JACK:
THERES APPLE MACS IPODS IPADS AND 1000 POUND CAMERAS

SAM:
THATS WHY IM HERE

(THEY HEAD FOR THE ROOM)

JACK:
LOOK ITS LOCKED CLEVER BUT NOT CLEVER ENOUGH, MY NEPHEW HAS AN ID CARD AND I TOOK THAT ASWELL

KAM:
CLEVER THNKING EINSTEIN

SAM:
WAIT HAS EVERY ONE GOT A BAG

ALL:
YEAH WHY

SAM:
GOOD LETS GET TO WORK

CHUN:
COME AND LOOK AT THE SCREEN IN THE OFFICE

JACK:
TEACHERS THESE DAYS HUH ALWAYS UP TO NO GOOD

SAM:
WELL THE TEACHERS WERE ALWAYS LIKE THIS

CHUN:
TALKING OF THE DEVILS THERES ONE COMING RIGHT AT US

SAM:
EVERYONE HIDE UNDER THE TABLE NEXT TO THE DOOR AND BE QUIET

(TEACHER MR AIRES COMES IN THAT IS WEARING A PURPLE TIE AND SHIRT AND A BLACK WAIST COAT AND BLACK TROUSERS)

JACK:
LET HIM GO IN TO THE OFFICE

(RUSTLING NOISE)

(MR AIRES LOOKS BACK, KAM SAM JACK AND CHUN GET OUT OF UNDER THE TABLE)

MR AIRES:
ARE YOU THOSE STUPID ROBBERS THAT PEOPLE TALK ABOUT ALL THE TIME

CHUN:
 OH SHIT WE'VE BEEN COMPROMISED

MR AIRES:
I'M CALLING THE POLICE!

JACK:
RUN



8 INT (RECEPTION STILL IN SCHOOL) 1700 HOURS

(JUST OUTSIDE THE SCHOOL THE BOYS RUN FOR THEIR LIFE HEADING ACROSS THE ROAD TOWARDS THE CAR PARK)

KAM:
LOOK QUICKLY GRAB THOSE TROLLEYS AND THEN RUN TO THE CAR PARK AND GO RIGHT TO THE TOP

(A WHILE LATER OUTSIDE THE FLATS)

JACK:
THE POLICE ARE ONTO US
(OUTSIDE THE CAR PARK)

SAM:
I THINK WE LOST THEM

CHUN:
AAAAAAARRRRGGGGHHHH 
(FALLS DOWN)

KAM:
WHAT HAPPENED

SAM:
PICK HIM UP AND CARRY HIM JACK, NOW

JACK:
RIGHT ON IT

(THEY RUN BUT STRUGGLE WITH CHUN, THEN JACK LETS GO OF CHUN)

CHUN:
LEAVE ME I'LL JUST SLOW YOU DOWN

JACK:
WHATS WRONG

CHUN:
I'M...HAVING.A ...HEART...ATTACK

KAM:
SAM, PRESS ON HIS CHEST AND QUICK

CHUN:
THIS....FEELS...GOOD

KAM:
THIS IS NOT THE TIME TO MESS ABOUT

CHUN:
REALLY...IT...FEELS....GOOD
AAGGGGGHHHHHHH
(BREATHS HEAVILY IN PAIN)

JACK:
PLEASE DON'T GO, BE STRONG

SAM:
CHUN JUST THINK ABOUT THOSE DAYS WHEN ROBBING THE SHOPS AND THE BANKS JUST THINK POSITIVE

CHUN:
DON'T...WORRY...I..CAN..MANAGE

JACK:
WHY WHAT IS IT WHAT HAPPENED

CHUN:
I'VE...JUST....REALIZED...THAT....
THIS...IS...DESTINY

KAM:
WHAT IS HUH

CHUN:
THIS, NOW... LEAVE..ME..AND JUST...... GO

JACK:
NO NO NO NO NO THE POLICE ARE JUST THERE

KAM:
LETS DRAG HIM UP AND HIDE BEHIND THE CAR

(ON THE WAY TO THE CAR CHUN DIES AND THEY FIND OUT WHEN THEY DROP HIM DOWN)

SAM:
NOOOO HE'S DEAD

KAM:
WHY TODAY THIS IS BAD

SAM:
WE'LL JUST HAVE TO GET HIM OUT OF HERE

JACK:
LET'S GO

KAM:
WHAT DO WE DO WITH ALL THIS STUFF

SAM:
JUST CHUCK IT IN THE CAR AND WE'LL KEEP SOME OF IT AND SELL THE REST

JACK:
I'VE JUST BOUGHT A 4 BEDROOM DETACHED HOUSE WITH 2 BATHROOMS, A SWIMMING POOL, GYM AND A BIG GARDEN SO WHAT DO YOU THINK

KAM:
GOOD IDEA

SAM:
 HOW MUCH FOR THE HOUSE

JACK:
250 GRAND BUT I THINK WE CAN NAGOTIATE WITH THE OWNER

KAM:
AND SELL ALL THE GOODS

SAM:
NOT A BAD IDEA C'MON LETS GO



(END OF SCRIPT)

1 comment:

  1. A nice, well-thought out script here, Asadullah, glad to hear you have listened to my suggestions on scene headings and character descriptions.
    1- There are a couple of lines you have not spotted which are not laid out properly. Read through again and correct them.
    2- Think about your stage directions (what is a "bag of robbery kit?" How does he "take out the guards?"
    3- If that last line is a caption (words on text) you have to label it as such.
    Otherwise, you have done a good job here!

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